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Zorro, open air —
dad cracks pumpkin seeds
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haiku #9a March 2011
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moon shadows —
you let too many petals
fall softly
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haiku #8 March 2011
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swallows
coat and gloves
sent to the attic
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This haiku was one of several picked by Vincent Hoarau to be featured in his blog La Calebasse, in a set of fantastic spring haiku he shared here.
haiku #7a March 2011
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hidden
gurgling down the rain pipe
a waterfall
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haiku #6 March 2011
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déjà vu
outside the city walls
daffodils
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haiku #5 March 2011
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conference room:
one way or another
we scale the fish
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haiku #4a March 2011
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churchyard yew —
smoke rings hover above
teens’ heads
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haiku #3 March 2011
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stranded on the mudflats
mother ewe with two lambs —
sound of rushing tide
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haiku #2 March 2011
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under the laptop keys
long after my cat died
her hair
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Also posted on Stella’s Stones
haiku #1 March 2011
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gazing
at the full moon I forgot
all about its hare
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Also Posted on Stella’s Stones
Haiku fever
The National Haiku Writing Month, February 2011, is now over. This was a month of writing at least one haiku each day. It has been a wonderful experience: the writing was great, the organizer and host Michael Dylan Welch (Graceguts) guided the group gently but steadily and the comments were very helpful without being overwhelming. Thank you Michael Dylan Welch, Alan Summers, and fellow participants!
I treated this writing month as a writing retreat. Reading up on haiku technique, enjoying other people’s haiku and getting into the habit of observing my own personal responses to the world. It is like learning to frame in words moments, like a photographer captures them in pictures or an artist sketches them. It is a form of mediation of experience and meditation in one.
Now that it is over, while I miss the discipline of the writing challenge, the support and energy of the community, I also know I gained enough to continue the practice.
I was chaffed when one of my own haiku was one among those highlighted in Red Dragonfly by Melissa Allen. You can read her whole post and enjoy her selections; better still, read her blog! By the way, she writes great experimental as well as ‘normal’ haiku.
While the actual NaHaiWriMo is now officially over, Alan Summers of With Words and Area 17 has agreed to continue prompting eager haiku poets for the month of March. I look forward to responding to the prompts as well as Alan’s, and the participants’ most helpful comments
I am finding out about the plethora of haiku groups and communities writing and commenting on each other’s work. I will be catching up with them soon. Meanwhile, I am exploring The Haiku Foundation’s site and blog: a vital resource for those bitten by the haiku bug.
As of today, I will be posting my haiku in my main blog, in my growing collection of haiku and also in Stella’s Stones; as usual, I will tweet it as well! Haiku published elsewhere will be presented with fanfare!
The file NaHaiWriMo (National Haiku Writing Month) will be active again next year, in February, when the next official NaHaiWriMo will be taking place.
haiku #28a NaHaiWriMo
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against the fence
a forgotten willow broom
buds
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Posted on Stella’s Stones
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #28 NaHaiWriMo
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white dove!
you bring an olive branch
to my heart
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Posted on Stella’s Stones
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #27 NaHaiWriMo
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over the school gates
marble owl —
twelve times table
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Posted on Stella’s Stones
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #26 NaHaiWriMo
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growing up —
from my daughter’s room
the sound of bongos
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Posted on Stella’s Stones
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #25 NaHaiWriMo
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vacant stare
through the bars
a lost world
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(echoes Rilke’s The Panther)
Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #24 NaHaiWriMo
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spring mist:
suspended over the lake
cotton balls
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #23 NaHaiWriMo
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alarm bells disturb
haiku in progress —
burning sardines
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #22a NaHaiWriMo
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cherry blossom–
old cat smiles at the blackbird
eating her food
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #22 NaHaiWriMo
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at the traffic lights
selling mountain rose:
boy with arrow
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #21a NaHaiWriMo
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school —
the smell of new books
on my desk
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #21 NaHaiWriMo
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origami —
unfolding a poem
I fold a haiku
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #20a NaHaiWriMo
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lullaby
louder than drizzle —
tea leaf song
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #20 NaHaiWriMo
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geranium
red petals …
for nails
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #19 NaHaiWriMo
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exchange —
my laptop
for a butterfly
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #18 NaHaiWriMo
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have you thought
of your effect on us?
full moon
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I wrote this haiku trying to understand aspects of (by skirting close to) Issa’s poem, posted as an epigraph on the Red Dragonfly blog http://haikuproject.wordpress.com/
Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
Stone story
Although Kareem is eight, he looks more like twelve. This is neither due to his hairstyle, nor to the long trousers and T-shirt he is wearing; rather the serious expression on his face, and the way he looks at you, straight in the eye. He sells stones.
He picked them himself carefully: not too big, for they will not travel far; not too small, for they will impress no one. He arranged them on his wooden tray and priced them accordingly: regular, one piastra; medium, two.
By the time the protesters wake up, he is standing in the furthest corner of the square, holding his tray for them to buy his stones. He pockets the notes and coins, and by the end of the first day of business he has enough money to buy his mother flatbread and tahina; and to pay off the loan to Aziz for the trip on the felucca he didn’t want his mother to know about.
On the second day though, the protest turns violent and few buy his stones; many grab them and run. Kareem ties his money in his handkerchief, puts it in his trouser pocket and starts for home.
Hours later, when he comes to, long after the van that knocked him unconscious sped away, he feels for his bundle. It is no longer there. His strength gone, he falls back to the ground and closes his eyes. He now looks the boy of eight he is.
This story first appeared on the writers’ challenge site 52|250 A Year of Flash
haiku #17 NaHaiWriMo
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spring tides —
a full moon halo
for my walk
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #16a NaHaiWriMo
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in the garden
a bush warbler serenades
plum tree blooms
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook.
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011
haiku #16 NaHaiWriMo
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too old now
to dance the sugar plum
fairy
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Posted on Stella’s Stones and Facebook
Participating in NaHaiWriMo February 2011