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shortest night—
all day she misses her beauty
sleep
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Prompt: Solstice. NaHaiWriMo extension 2011.
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shortest night—
all day she misses her beauty
sleep
.
Prompt: Solstice. NaHaiWriMo extension 2011.
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I am mesmerised by the simple tactic of isolating the word ‘sleep’ on a line of its own – how such a minimal device can lift a poem.
Marie.
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