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sun-kissed Aegean
gulls swoop where the boat
has been

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Prompt: journey. NaHaiWriMo extension 2011.

I have been reading an article published in Notes from the Gean, The Intentional Ellipses: Haiku and its Relationship to Space, by Tracy Koretsky, and so experimenting with space in this haiku. While not a new article – it was first published in Triplopia, the excellent  internet journal no longer available online – it had escaped me first time round.  I am so glad Notes from the Gean published it now. I am going back to reading and trying out more space haiku…